| Of Alenvar - an excerpt of the Miloran
Cycle |
Of all Elven legends, the Miloran Cycle is certainly the most
fascinating. It not only plays a pivotal role in the history of the Elves, but
is also remembered in such great detail. If you ever happen to meet an Elvish
storyteller, you will find that he could speak for hours about Alenvar's first
journey alone. You could listen for days and hear no more than a part of the
Cycle.
After spending most of my life with the elves of Forenor, I feel that I
should pass on some of my knowledge to those of my people who haven't had the
good fortune to be welcome among the Fair Folk. This is the story of Alenvar I
wish to tell, and although we will meet other key figures of the Miloran Cycle
as they cross his path, they must remain in the background. The same is true
for many of Alenvar's deeds, as I do not wish to simply recount the numerous
battles with his foes, but the inner struggles that determined his, and in the
end his people's, fate.
When after the long odyssey Menagond of the Wood-elves and the wise and
beautiful Telimae found together, they had a son and they named him Alenvar.
He grew up to become a skilled hunter and soon surpassed his father in strength
and might, and of his mother he learned much of the great lore of old.
His journeys took him far to the north and long he wandered unseen in the lands
of Men, where he became aware of preparations as of war. And being uneased and
roused by these tidings, he went to Elgilad, the Elvish chief city at the river
Elenstroem, and spoke before the Council. His account bore no great surprise
however, for Men were already entering the realm of Elves in large numbers,
although most of them were simple folk that kept away from Elvish
settlements.
`Ever since Men first crossed the mountains, we have given way to them',
Alenvar said. `But now we have to stand and fight ere we are washed into the
sea!'
There the Wise learned of the fire that was in him and Marglir Evenstar, First
of all Great said: `More war has been waged by those of Elven lineage than most
of us know, and no good came of it. And I sense a bad end coming upon you, if
you do not rein your hatred.'
But the Wise also knew how great a warrior Alenvar was, and they feared that
he would not listen to reason, but rather go and fight the battle on his own.
To prevent him from such foolishness, they chose to give him an occupation to
his liking in the hope that the task at hand would calm his restless spirit.
He received command over a score of rangers and was sent north to watch the
borders and drive away any trespasser. But unforseeable are the ways of fate,
and on this errand he was, when the shadow befell him and he became estranged
to his folk and its customs.
They had made camp in the fair country around the Foroduin, the river marking
the northern border, where still many Elves dwelled; and from there, alone or
in pairs they went about their business. It was so that Alenvar met Andomiel
and, although he did not know her, like a fair summer day she seemed to him as
she walked among the trees, and his heart was filled with delight.
But even before he could step onto the path to greet her, he became aware of a
faint sound as of swift and light footsteps, and from the brush came a horde of
filthy men, their eyes glittering with lust as they approached their prey.
They wore ragged furs and carried long daggers, but some of them had bows also
and their bare feet made hardly any noise on the soft ground.
Andomiel froze as she saw her doom ahead, but out of the trees came Alenvar and
with a mighty stroke of his sword, he beheaded the nearest foe. Then the
remaining villains came upon him. Yet, with a few hews, he drove them apart,
and those still on their feet turned and fled into the forest.
But perilous are Men even in their defeat, and just as Andomiel turned to
meet Alenvar, full of strange and wondrous feelings, an arrow came flying from
under the trees. Though it was badly aimed and only pierced her shoulder, she
fell where she stood, for an icy poison was entering her body, and she died in
Alenvar`s arms. But at the moment of her doom she gazed into his eyes and so
deep her love for him was, that her soul went not beyond, but straight to her
heart's desire. And so eyes met eyes, and souls met souls, and deep within
Alenvar, a part of her lived forth.
His companions, stirred by the din of battle, found him kneeling besides
Andomiel, who even in death was fair to look at; and Isgil, who was friend with
Alenvar, recognised her and cried: `Unfortunate Andomiel! Your curse is broken,
but only short was your luck.'
Now they were bewildered and curious and they began to question Alenvar and
there they became aware of the change that had befallen him. For he stared
ahead with lifeless eyes and would not answer, and his spirit remained closed
to them.
So they took them both back to the camp and laid Alenvar to rest in his tent.
Andomiel they buried under a lonely tree in the centre of the clearing. Then
they held counsel, for they knew no advice and none of them had learned how to
tend wounds of heart or mind. But even greater was their surprise and
confusion, when they returned to the tent and found Alenvar gone, with no trace
or sign showing them the path he had taken, and it was a long time, ere they
heard of him again.
Long wandered Alenvar in darkness. He ate when he felt hungry and slept when
he was tired, but his mind was clouded with pain and anger and a steadily
increasing hatred of Men and their evil doings. Although he went where chance
might take him in this pathless country, guided only by Andomiel`s spirit, he
travelled mostly southwards and was not far from Elgilad when he finally
reached the Elenstroem. And there, the merry tinkling of the water as it ran
with much haste along its stony bed, chased his dark thoughts away, and for the
first time since Andomiel's death did he come to senses. And there at the
waterside, against all Elvish traditions, he swore an oath to free his people
from the menace of Men.
With this intent he came to the High City and people looked at him with
wonder, for a fire was gleaming in his eyes, and although his clothes were
ragged and hung in pieces from his dirty skin, his steps were firm and steady,
and like a king he walked the streets, not like the beggar he seemed to be.
Straight to the Council he went and great was the surprise among the Wise. It
was not his appearance which drew their attention, for they could see deeper,
but the shadow in his heart and the fierceness in his eyes.
`We had news that Alenvar, son of Menagond, is lost', Marglir spoke, `and alas!
now that I see you before me, I must confess 'tis true indeed.'
But Alenvar replied `Then your need has to be truly great, if the lost return to
save you', and there they fell silent while he spoke long of battle and war.
Of the human nature he told them, for much he had learned about their ways and
thoughts on his journeys through their realms. And of the errors of the Wise
whenever dealing with Men, he accused them. Men would never renounce a thing
they could easily take, and to them, the Elvish land seemed such a thing. `And
once their soldiers come to plunder and pillage, many of our folk will perish
on the battlefield and even more will be slain in their homes or taken to
slavery. But bring the war to them and they might realize that we are not an
easy prey at all!' Thus spoke Alenvar.
There Marglir said: `Can't you see that violence is not the way to deal with
Men? Or did your resistance prevent Andomiel from her fate?' and so Alenvar
learned how great a loss he really suffered and this only added to his
obsession. And Marglir saw that he himself had lead up to Alenvar's fall, and
he was sad and full of compassion; and he finally said: `To send our folk to
war lies beyond the Councils authority, but if this is your wish, you may bring
forth your request and lead those willing to follow you against Men.' But deep
within his heart he hoped that others would see the errors in Alenvar's way and
bring him back to senses.
But Marglir did not know how much Telimae had taught her son, and when
Alenvar spoke before his people, he recounted many tales of old, where Elves
had striven for peace, but the chieftains of Men never kept their oaths for
long, and peacefulness always turned out disadvantageous. Andomiel's spirit
gave him the strength to reach into the hearts of those who listened to his
words and so many amongst the crowd were willing to accompany him. But some
said: `Who are you, to speak against the Council?' and there Isgil, who
happened to be in Elgilad at that time, stood up and told of Alenvar's great
deeds in the northern mark, and so the remaining doubts were cast aside and all
who were skilled in the use of weapons followed Alenvar out of their free will;
and after that, Isgil was made second in command. But those who could not
follow Alenvar into battle spread the news of his plans. And so, many more
came to his aid and when he left he led a host of 1000 fighters, armed with
bows and spears. But some carried swords of steel and were clad in dwarvish
mail, and those were led by Isgil.
On secret and hidden paths they came into the north and no message of their
intention came to human ears. Now Elvish scouts told Alenvar of many armed Men
gathering near Farandale, a human city not far from Aerengist, where the
Foroduin was calm and shallow and a ford crossed the river. And during a dark
and moonless night Alenvar led his men across the river and with the first
light of dawn they came unseen to Farandale and there more warriors where
encamped than Elves were following Alenvar; but surprise was on his side and
none of those Men ever left the battlefield again, and only few Elves fell.
And when the people of Farandale saw what happened, they fled in terror and
Alenvar laid fire to their homes. There Isgil said: `Is it not enough that we
slay their kindred and put fear into their hearts? You are the man no longer
that won kind Andomiel's love.' But Alenvar in his anger swore at him and
after that their friendship grew cold.
Soon the chieftains of Men learned of the Elvish battalion and the defeat of
their army at Farandale and they were more watchful in their own lands. But
Alenvar was familiar with the country from his previous wanderings and little
news of his movements reached the warlords. For now, they had to give him free
hand and many more settlements shared their fate with Farandale. There was
little fighting though, since only few could withstand the sight of Alenvar and
his fellow Elves approaching, with stern faces and in absolute silence. But
what first appeared to be easily won victories turned out perilous for
Alenvar.
By driving the people away instead of killing them, and by laying waste to their
homes, so they had nothing to return to, many refugees went further north,
where it was easy for the warlords to gather willing soldiers for another, even
larger army.
Now Isgil, fearing that Alenvar was no longer guided by the aim to aid his
people, but had given way to his own, dark obsession, made a final approach to
soothe his friend:
`Have you not fulfilled your oath' he asked. `If there are Men left that have
not learned to respect our kind, you will never teach them. Retreat now and
the lesson will be well remembered, but let them defeat you and all your
efforts will come to nothing.' But in his pride, and because his hatred of
everything concerning Men was now unbound, Alenvar despised the warning and so
Marglir's prediction began to fulfil itself. For Isgil, driven by some
strange, inner voice, began to speak in secrecy against his former friend, and
many were willing to listen, and they watched Alenvar's mood with disquiet and
no longer trusted into his leadership. So far, they had suffered few losses
and caused much damage, but every new day put them into greater danger and most
of them had already enough of their destructive business and of the harsh and
desolate land.
Then accounts of another army of Men marching southwards reached them, and
they sat together to make plans. Isgil and many of his secret followers shared
the opinion that the warlords were not interested in battle if not confronted
and that it would be best to retreat over the Foroduin. Alenvar however was
not so faithful. He knew the hearts of Men best, and to him it was obvious
that they would seek vengeance and such he told them, and also where the best
location for an ambush was in this country. But, already spoilt by Isgil,
weary of further battles and anticipating the return, most Elves overheard the
truth in Alenvar's words and few took his doubts serious. Instead they made
his well known temper responsible for the intention to launch another attack
and in the end, Alenvar had to give in to them.
So they returned, save a few trusted kinsmen that were left behind by Alenvar
to watch the warlords' doings. There was much joy among the Elves as they
crossed the Foroduin and came into their own country again, and there they
rested and all dark thoughts and sorrow fell from them. Only Alenvar found no
peace, for he feared that Men would not be so merciful once they brought the
war to the Elvish realm. When finally messengers arrived, with news of the
nearing enemy, he was fully consumed by his obsessions, and he could not bear
the thought of Men setting their foot on Elvish land. And when his fellows,
alarmed by the unexpected development, and still remembering Alenvar's words
about the human thirst for revenge, asked him what to do, he decided against
all common sense to hold the ford of Aerengist against the foe. He and his
fighters would guard the entrance to the ford, but Isgil should remain hidden
to attack the enemy from behind. This time, Isgil did not argue, for he was
eyed with suspicion now, but deep inside his heart he was worried and fear grew
in him. So they parted, and while Isgil vanished into the nearby hills,
Alenvar took position at the riverbank to await the assault.
It came after dawn, when mist that had risen from the Foroduin still hovered
over the valley and clouded the opponents' sight. But Isgil, out of his
elevated position, could see how numerous the enemy was: row upon row filled
the valley from one end to the other, and there all courage left him and, sure
death in his eyes, he took his men and fled and it was much later ere he found
forgiveness. Only one of his warriors, Thalin by name, withstood Isgil's order
and went to his peoples aid, and a few of his kindred went with him. When they
came near the ford, the battle was already against Alenvar, and only with much
effort and under great losses he could hold back the enemy. Now they made
haste and fought their way to Alenvar's banner, and little harm they suffered
for their armour was strong and of high craftsmanship. So they met in the
midst of battle, and as Thalin told of Isgil's treachery, sadness came upon
Alenvar and the darkness fell of him at last and he saw that the battle was
lost. There he ordered retreat, but he and Thalin and those with him remained
to hold back the hordes of Men. Suddenly the first sunbeams broke through the
mist, making water and dewdrops in the grass gleam in all the rainbow's colours,
and within the circle of light stood Alenvar with his companions, and such an
impressive sight they were, that the attack came to a halt. So many of the
Elves would escape across the river and into the forest before the humans
recovered from their frozen awe and threw themselves at the remaining
defenders. And in the end, only Alenvar stood, and many more he slew before
his death and when the warlords finally came into the realm of Elves, many of
their fighters lay dead at the ford of Aerengist and only little mischief they
caused before they were scattered and driven back.
So ended the greatest of Elvish warriors of this age, but from then on many
Elves learned the art of warfare and although they never became a warlike folk,
they could defend themselves much better against any assaults and this they owe
to Alenvar.
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